Idea for a song?

Someone has to wonder
What happened to my brother
On a desert somewhere far away.

He's taken his time
Finding a home thats alright
Know he doesn't belong where he be.

Now he's broken his shine
Sold himself for a dime
Never wondering if what he is might need change.

And I know that you don't
Want to know how you are
I can see it in your absent stare
Yet I can't help but think
In that simple, slow blink
That you might have found a way out yet.

You are a scream
A metaphorical queen
'A anthem unto herself' the people sing.

Yet she's fooled herself
An imitation of wealth
For a fool thinks and does in their heart.

So she took a vow
To not be who they are
A woman left alone by the world
Should I run that way
For fear of an axe so small?
She don't know enough of love to persist.

Shove your love out the door
Though your aching and sore
Absent minded of the one you adore.

Manufactured in grace
This life you take you can make
An improvement if you just turn around

I love you my friend
But with your heart un-amend
You might find your lonely again